All Comments on 'Steam'

.....and teacups an analogy for the female reproductive organ? It/they appear in both your poems, which BTW I like, particularly this one.<P> I see from your profile you are new to Literotica, so welcome and I look forward to more of your work.<P>

Tess

I love this poem. It's subtly erotic, the best kind of erotic.

I enjoyed reading both your poems, and also hope you write and submit more. Intense eroticism boils just below the surface, the best place for it in a poem. Your handling of language in both poems shows much to admire. TheRainMan

Just right amount of the barest of imagery to tease my interest and desire for a follow-up.