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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

So damn sexy!!!!

Loved it 29!!!!! 5 stars for you sir! x

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years agoAuthor

Credits for inspiration go to foot_fetish_fan. Sending feedback on the question why a fantasy setting got more attention than a poem with a realistic one. I added a very raw version of Stilettos to give an idea for a realistic scene. Without that question this poem here would never have been given birth. So, thanks for your pondering, fff.

It certainly was fun to play with words, meaning and ambiguity. I hope you like the tiny twist at the end.

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

Well done, I loved your word play particularly "Sylvia's saucy secretarian smile." However, to paraphrase Winston Churchill "Sometimes a show is just a shoe"

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 3 years ago

So many perfect lines deftly played.

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'The world always seems brighter when you've just made something that wasn't there before.' - Neil Gaiman ----- Writing some poetry, and maybe a story, somewhere between light vanilla and dark thorns. Now and then, I throw in illustrations, mostly colored pencils. Somewhere...