by Linbido
long after I was done reading. I just had to come back and let you know.
- Mindy
do it for me. After the first stanza, it went straight downhill. The listing seemed so bland, unenthusiastic and rather strained by the end of the poem.
of life. The contrast between a stale lit-de-parade and a life that was lived to the fullest is a splendid observation.
I'm sorry. I had to get that out of my system. lol
Really Good poem, fast paced, worth more than one read.
I absolutely adore this poem. *highlight and save* Keep on! Just a question...should the were be was?
I wish we'd see you more often. :)
wowowoowow! my tongue is all slippery with this one, and it feels delicious. I love reading your voice.