by Maydaypilot
Fuck!
That was AMAZING!
What a poem, what a journey, what a story!
It was perfect.
You came and conquered.
An Opus.
Ohhh. There are parts of this one I wish I had written. Or at least inspired. ;)
"liquid in the core of my cast life" slayed me. So apt, so devastating. This is a gorgeous, and heartbreaking poem you have shared. I wish I had written it.