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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Your burning is consuming this boys soul

the burn consumes

the burn scalds the soul

the soul is in the caldron

being stirred until

the soul is ready

for perfection

and yet the burning

soul is ready for

consumption as it is

it is ready

submissively terry

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