All Comments on 'Subway Ride'

If only I had a ticket to ride.

I love it. I think we've all been there...lusting over some random stranger. So good.💕

Sexy and artistic, without sacrificing the raw, rude sensuality of everyday life.

I do hate poetry, and once again this is excellent, eloquently capturing a small moment in time that mirrors the thoughts and emotions we've all had (more than once) for a fleeting longish-instant in our lives, reflecting something we at least momentarily desired, but not really enough to go after. Desire, passion, eroticism, opportunity, and a tinge of regret in a world of myriad what-ifs, all captured in a handful of lines and words.

Excellent.

Masterfully crafted