All Comments on 'Suga'

the combo words.

Sometimes they come off as cliche but in this poem they are perfect description.

May I say...very sexy poem too

Thank you

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

It's all about the rhytym, and your phrasing and word combos give this a writhing, driving force. Tasty.

I don't get this one...maybe I'm reading too deep, maybe not deep enough...still, for some reason I like it. Perhaps the words are stiring something in my unconscious. Nice work..I think.