All Comments on 'Suicide'

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

Happy New Year~

Art~

Especially the first paragraph, which is superb! In the second paragraph, do you mean "splintered?" The imagery of the Mockingbird is novel and I like the idea of both protagonists being losers at the end. Keep on posting, you seem to have a natural affinity for poetry. (PS- I posted one of your past poems on my "vague poetry" thread!

I'd spot the patterns anywhere, it's as if I have read this poet before, or is it its?

An interesting tale, but is it suicide or murder?

jim : )