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Click hereThere's nothing more wonderful
than SummerMornings.
Heat that caresses my body;
The need to stretch out and feel
the warmth upon my naked skin.
Eyes closed, imagining your tongue
dancing along my hot skin, creating
goosebumps that raise my excitement;
hands that awaken my senses,
kisses that stir my need,
There is nothing more wonderful
than words whispered in my ears;
the passion reflected in your eyes
the touch of skin upon skin....
There is nothing more wonderful
than SummerMornings on a
cold, winters day....
What could I do but vote the way I did? Not that it was very hard or painful - you could try being somewhat more domineering ;)
eroticly pleaseing..
great poem...your as
tantalizing as a bit o honey~
...it has a very sensual, languid feel to it. Summer Morning should feel very proud!
I was impressed by the simplicity and clarity of this reverie; and also, the strong ending, which was clever without being too "cute," I thought. I'm sort of a sucker for good, strong, every-day nouns and adjectives (words, ears, eyes, skin) and the inventiveness of "SummerMornings" seemed totally necessary. I'd have changed "winters" to either "winter's" or "winter" ...