All Comments on 'SummerMornings'

I was impressed by the simplicity and clarity of this reverie; and also, the strong ending, which was clever without being too "cute," I thought. I'm sort of a sucker for good, strong, every-day nouns and adjectives (words, ears, eyes, skin) and the inventiveness of "SummerMornings" seemed totally necessary. I'd have changed "winters" to either "winter's" or "winter" ...

the very end. I think that was what really made the poem. :)

...it has a very sensual, languid feel to it. Summer Morning should feel very proud!

eroticly pleaseing..

great poem...your as

tantalizing as a bit o honey~

Not bad, not bad....

What could I do but vote the way I did? Not that it was very hard or painful - you could try being somewhat more domineering ;)

That made me feel warmer. Nice visuals.

Made feel very hot on this cool autumn morning.

ty,BD