All Comments on 'Summers sweet kisses'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Nice passage through the seasons but

I'm wondering if you submitted this at 2 in the morning;

Just look at that typo, "feiry, strecthed"

Those little things do so distract when what you meant to say was,

"fiery, stretched."

Make that spell check work for you

Especially before you hit submit!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Beautiful.

Lovely rich images that paint each Season's delights faithfully. Live for Life.

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