All Comments on 'Sunset Sonata'

An excellent poem. It reads like a painting. Great rythmn and ryhming, too. Excellent stuff!

and fully deserving, IMHO, of an "E".

I've always felt somewhat sad at sunset... "Tinted color loses shine symphony fades." describes that melancholy mood perfectly. A time to be near, and close, to a loved one!

Superb ~ again. Go ahead, let all the words of praise you've earned go to your head!

I haunt my favorite gallery

a guilty pleasure of mine

and wander aimlessly

amongs all the works displayed

some lead to mystic places

others reach out to touch

with bold colors and broad strokes

I always hope deep in my heart

to see something new

from my favorite painter

I stare long minutes

at the masterful hand

of a well toned brush

the pastiche amazes me

textures as rich

as a heady wine

the colors entice and enspell

and allways leave me

curious hungry

for more and more

so I have to go to the cafe

conviently next door

and I ponder

as the words and pastry

are digested

the wonder and the power

of all cymry chooses to share