All Comments on 'Surrender'

I really enjoyed some of the imagery you put into this piece, especially this passage:

"The smallest touch is epic,

a wildfire,

fed by smoke-edged

submission."

nice descriptive poem about love- I really liked this

Enjoyed the jarring format of this poem, love to see highly-stylized pieces that work. A positive:

"Her tongue etches

tender wounds,

indelibly ingrained

onto flushed skin."

Best lines in the poem IMO. A negative: expressions like "Ah" seemed to take me out of the experience. <3