All Comments on 'Surrender to Understanding'

Beautiful

Such moments of brilliance. "a rock hard erection under a belt" What imagery!

"you wanted

to taste moans in your mouth

hold them in your throat

until raw"

Amazing!

This is a strong poem, and goes quite well with God of Fuck. Religious themes are interesting to play with in the realm of erotica.

There are a few places where I'd tighten up on some lines, caress a few spellings, and fondle your apostrophes. But, this one will still get you where you want to go.