All Comments on 'Swallow Me'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Swallowing, licking;

watching her muscles guivering;

that is the most highly-charged

erotic moment...

until it's time for round two...

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
VERY SENSUAL...

I loved it to the very core, but uh,ahem,..umm curious, I am so sorry gonna have to forget the poem for a minute, I am going to find LeBroz, LMAO !!!!!!! DAYUM, and round 2, hmmmm... *winks* Great Writing, as always.....-sGp-

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Do you type with one hand?

I read you that way!

A fun and sexy poem.

Fly

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
it's a deal.....

and i love every bit of this one. the words seem to have a duality here.....nicely done.......don

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