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by HerRectalSlave

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Come to the point sooner (metaphorically and literally)

you write like you hunt, tediously

no need for so many verses,

you start at her feet but do you arrive at her cock?

(she is either a big woman or a tranny)

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I'm just another writer (if you want to call it that) with ideas swirling around in my head that I want to write down. Maybe I can become good at this, and your feedback will be vital to me becoming good at writing. Well, hopefully anyway.