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by Liar

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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really surprised me ~ the last line.

you have some killer lines here

"turned all gravity to dirt."

being the best.

sacksackover 18 years ago
more rugged than usual

were you mad when you wrote this?

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
superb ending......

but damn....it's coming across the jaw...*LOL*. great lines in this one. nicely done liar.....don

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