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by HotKittySpank

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 18 years ago
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It's very good that you let the reader know about Kamo no Chomei. I wish you would have put his lines in italics. I'd like to know which parts of the poem are yours. :)

I do like the poem, especially the first stanza.

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