by ShyErraticTable
Another 30/30 piece today ~
I like the metaphor, it works so well;
Reminds me of a candle with a wick too long ~
Not being trimmed, it falls onto the wax,
Wrecking even more, exposing still more wick and in its passion, all becomes undone.
My friend, I only realized that while I've been enjoying your poems, I haven't taken the time to publically declare how wonderful they are.
I declare they (and you) are most wonderful. I think your form poems are amazing...and that is a most unbiased comment.
A love too hot ~ not to cool down. Another SET exquisite rendering.