All Comments on 'Taste'

you would do better with four lines:

The perineum, halfway between heaven and nirvana/

A wet path licked down to the forbidden/

That secret cave where I taste the ridges of her starfish/

One last plunge and the biblical flood/

Drop word secret (it's not, and next to cave)- pearls are so overplayed. Explore the difference between heaven and nirvana? Is there?

I have now read both of your poems and found both to be simply amazing. I have just submitted my first poem today and have not written a poem in years. You have inspired me to let my creativity shine.....I just hope someday I can write like this!!!