All Comments on 'Teach Me'

I like the rhyme, the beat and the intention here. Good job!

again hun, it can be plucked a bit but i loved the message, the flow.

i read it with excitement of what the next words would be.

very nice!

...on my face, after reading this. feverfish, fast fuck-it-all rhythm to this gorgeous rant.

that I could teach you anything you didn't already know -

Your poems beg to be read out loud by girls with soft-chocolate skin and evil tongues.

Nicely done.

fantastic metaphors, alliteration, playful wording, and soooo sexy - great job

Girl, all I can say is DAYYUMM! Speak on it!