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My Erotic Trailalmost 18 years agomention
This poem was mentioned in the thread 'New Poems Reviews'
Thanks for the literary journey (~_~)
Anonymousalmost 18 years agogood
I enjoyed reading this mystical read
One thought: considering replacing the word 'wing' in the first line with something more concise like 'flight', it sounds a little awkward when read out loud in its current form.
Good effort
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