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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Nice flow and words

You have a nice flow and use of words - but the prose is too purple for the poem to have any effect (from my perspective).

Thus 'The animals cower, the insects wait in terror of what may come'. I mean really - even for a devil insects waiting in terror? I would be really interested to read poems from you that rein it in a little.

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Getting older, wishing I'd taken advantage of more opportunities. I like to write, and, at the same time, I hate it. It is a fickle mistress, and it flees when I'm depressed, leaving me unable to write. It's been a while since I've been on here, but I will try to add more stor...