All Comments on 'Temptation'

Please don't let me love and want you ~ quite this much.

Even my skin prickles, tingles and glows after reading your beautiful poem.

You show a certain maturation here compared to your earlier work. Many who write at Lit do so for a brief period and show no change or growth in their style; you've shown both here and I look forward to seeing continued growth in your skills as a poet.