All Comments on 'Temptation game'

by jessy24

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Reversal of

Fortune -----U spin a wicked tale , Jessy ! 5-ed .....

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
shd. be "he has taken your

heart" in the last stanza

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

The player gets played? To win the heart, you must play the game correctly...

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
reality

if it wasn't for a couple of typos, this is pretty damn good, you actually paint the male female interaction perfectly.

jessy24jessy24over 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you!I love the comments!

Xoxo

J

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