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Feelings prior to a hook-up
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Shrouded in shadow with silent anticipation.
Face painted with screen's eerie pale light.
Refresh and check, refresh and check again.
Eyes ablaze for a change in mundane routine.
The world stops as a new notification arises.
Heart races, fingers tremble, could it be him?
Fear restrains, and anxiety again takes hold.

Is it him? What if it isn't?
Will he come? What if he doesn’t?

Communication open, the sender identified.
Rendezvous proposed, same time, my place.
Ferocious hunger rivaled by crippling angst.
Self-deprivation entangled with relentless lust.
A second message recieved, further urging.
The eternal struggle, desire versus reason.
By loin's pleas are my senses are overcome.

A time set, plans made.
Battle lost, a knock at the door.

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AlexBaileyAlexBaileyalmost 2 years ago

I wish I could greet you at the door with a smile. :)

Bn2fBn2falmost 2 years ago

This is my favorite piece you’ve done so far.

Great description of feeling of anticipation.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 2 years ago

From click to knock so many complex emotions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You are a wonderfully talented writer as well as a treasured friend. Thank you for sharing yourself with us. This is beautiful.

DoubleDonged69DoubleDonged69almost 2 years ago

This hit home for me. Thank you

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