All Comments on 'The Affair'

Loved this poem... Got right to the point.. No beating around the bush. Sometimes our secrets can come back an Bite~~*Smiles* Keep the poems coming..

This is really cute and ever so true. You ar egood with word pictures.

This really needs one more stanza. It doesn't seem quite finished. A few more lines could wrap this up nicely.

begs for a closing stanza...but love what's there so far.

or maybe the town talkers and voyeurs are best left

to finish this tale.