All Comments on 'The Anal Alternative'
by Brittni4u
- 9 Comments
Brittni4uabout 5 years agoAuthorHi sweeties.....just so you know..the first word in this poem is supposed to be..."There" and it was not my mistake...it was Literoticas....I checked my submission and it is on them...hope you enjoyed it anyway...kisses...
FOUNTAINPEN67about 5 years agoYou bring back the fun of school days reading dirty jokes on bathroom walls but you have managed to elevate it to a collegiate level of cleverness and decadence. Anal sex fans can rejoice... they have a lyrical bard named Brittni putting this wonderfully hedonistic act into poetry!
daylilygardenerabout 5 years agoAnother hot submission...even as a poem...I have a hot vision of you being done is all those positions. I too can appreciate a lover who wants and desires anal. I had one long term lover would that's all he wanted...seems his wife was only into vaginal missionary and get it over fast...5 Stars.
RodThrustinabout 5 years agoBritt's at the head of the class
Of taking his wood up the ass
And the boasts she can make
About how much she can take
Proves she's a poetic young lass.
5 stars, Brittni.
legsfeettoesabout 5 years agoYour above poem wouldn't pass
In my new-style poetry class!
Yes, I'm the professor
But also a confessor
That I'd love my tongue up your ass!
In my office, I'm waiting for you
To tell you the poem is poo!
Come up after class.
Don't cover your ass,
And I'll lick it before we screw!
The bad poetry is done.
It was all written in fun.
Five stars I gave to you
'Cuz I love all that you do!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoGreat poem, so funny, hot, amusing and sensual all at once. You are really creative, Brittni, and just as kinky. Congrats! My favorite part was:
"Once she is in his bed
Before he inserts his head
He must take the tube and properly lube
For her ass to be properly bred
When it’s greased and ready to slide
Every inch does properly hide
No time to sleep, she takes it balls deep,
That skill, she beams with pride
At first she starts on her back
He lifts her legs for attack
Her insides are jarred, he thrusted so hard,
Balls violently slapping her crack
Strong orgasms, she did expect em
Never once having to correct him
From the cock that she took, she trembled and shook,
His meat buried deep in her rectum."
Keep up the excellent work. I never get tired of your stories; and poems.
Brittni4u@Brittni4u
