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by willieb153
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Cleardaynowabout 10 years agoI like this best of the poems you have submitted recently
I like the thoughts and progression in this poem. What you say is worth saying.
It is purely my personal opinion but this poem would be far better without the constant rhyming. To my ears it thus becomes very tum-ti-tum. However, it is impressive that none of the rhymes seem forced.
Ashesh9about 10 years agothere's an element of the Stocklholm syndrome in the Battered Wife :
the hostage eroticizes/ romanticizes the captor quite irrationally/illogically but wholly emotionally ??!!!
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