All Comments on 'The Beginning'

I enjoyed your poem and hope to see more.

I think of your skin as I stand in the shower

Its sensual softness, evocative power

fecundate mountain of Venus’s flower

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I like the flow and the visuals here.

Felt your need, and want come crashing through.

Yes, I know this poem is light and sensual,

just I did feel your overpowering emotion.

Just loved this feeling behind the words ~

Welcome to Lit.

I also look forward to seeing more from you ~~!!!!

*Smiles*

RF said it so well;

felt the need and want come crashing through,

and, by yourself

incomplete

Oh Dear El..your words touch right to the core of me.Time,distance,space no no the longing never goes away

Another very nice read. Good job.

Tattler

Very well done! I liked the first one I read but I loved this one

I would love to hear you read this one outloud...such a nice flow !

Vivid images are formed by your words..of him wishing, hoping for his girl who is so far away...