All Comments on 'The bogeyman'

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RhymeSmithRhymeSmithabout 16 years ago
Ouch!

In keeping with my input to the thread on comments, well done.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Superbly done expression of horror and innocence.

champagne1982champagne1982about 16 years ago
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Your use of rhyme in this poem adds the contradiction of childlike development mixed into an all too adult realm of experience. You say just enough and I'm glad you chose to say it out loud.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread. :)

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
where even bogeyman pales

A tale of man made torment chills you worse than the scariest bogeyman.

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