The Chilling Birth of an Emperor

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The Chilling Birth of an Emperor

Eighty below and a blizzard blows
over the arctic ice and snow
a cracked egg between two legs
rests on a penguin's toes.

When a little beak takes a peek
at the white world outside its shell
continually trying to shed its confines
a baby bird bursts, into a frozen hell.

The father with love picks it up from above
tucks it into a bed of feathered fur
enchantingly genuine, a baby penguin
the chilling birth of an Emperor.

All the clouds gathered and witness this sight
born is a bird that will never take flight.

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Pandoras DesirePandoras Desireabout 17 years ago
well done

loved it! very good piece.

BikeNutBikeNutabout 17 years ago
Cool little piece

about a hot topic with everyone's love of penguins. Billie

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 17 years ago
Antarctic Bound

This tale took me to the bottom of the world, like a little National Geographic Special.

CaPic267CaPic267about 17 years ago
Wonderful Tale

Those darling images you give here are only wrecked when you think of the hard life they have .. and if one parent dies while fishing it's bad news. CP

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 17 years ago
Cute

Just love this cute little penguin tale. EM

PatHous56PatHous56about 17 years ago
So Sweet

With an Easter so cold, what could be better than to read of the perils and joys of Antarctic life?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
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Awww...this is cute. Nice to read a cute, fuzzy birdy poem. :)

-Curiouswife

wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 17 years ago
poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
nothing warms your heart

like the sight of a fluffy baby penguin!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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All very well and nicely descriptive with one tiny geographic detail out of place — I think you could have kept everything intact if you'd said antarctic instead. Still, making for creative allowances, a most enjoyable little piece.

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