All Comments on 'the cosmic cane'

by sandyb

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
do you mean?

the ass-tral plane?

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 7 years ago

This tickles my imagination to envision more than one interpretation. Perhaps you didn't intend that, sandy, but I like that in a poem.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 7 years ago
PS

Lines 3 & 4 are outstanding.

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