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sean080183sean080183over 1 year ago

i really enjoyed this one. i had to read it a few times to get a feel for the moment. this may just be me not understanding but i do have a question. "And in that forest, dark again, I saw a creature tall.

We drank with us, of citrus mix, kaleidoscopic love.". is the "we drank with us" supposed to be there? is it like a collective we?. other then that, you created a wonderful piece. thank you for sharing

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