All Comments on 'the curve of your neck has'

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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 17 years ago
yes

ah the intensity of the magnification making us want to shrink down to the atomic level and sink rigt into the pores the molecules the electrons of a lover, an almost lover the desire to sink another letter between the syllables of the One

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Prolific M&M with another lovely piece

Of such powerful imagery

I imagine her here with me now

Tantalizing view of her neck so smooth...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Imaginative

and quite lovely, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailover 17 years ago
Consider the impact

of this space:

when the angle is

just

right

of these lines:

and sweetly fucks with the head

of pi

on the rest of the poem, too cute, too cute

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