by Chimney Sweep
Oh, dear, I meant: a man after my own heart.
Apart from a couple of 'and did he do' type lines this is perfect. Bounces along; and full of wit and insight.
This was a really fun read, but... ummm... could you change Beth to maybe Judy, or Pat.... ANYTHING but Beth!! lol
Thanks,
Boo
That wasw the funniest thing I've read in years, your control of the4 verse was exellent, and many an insightful line with humorus cruve does grace the pages of your poem. I look forward to more like this, keep up the good work.
I've come back to read it three or four times now, so I figured I should leave a comment ; )
Thoroughly Enjoyable!!
I was just cruising through reading some of the other stuff that my fellow poetry writers have written and i am glad i read this one AMAZING
That kicked ass. I could almost see the Dr. Seuss book in my head.
OMFG. So clever and comical. Thank you for that great laugh.