All Comments on 'The Dragon's Flame'

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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Copyright, Trademarked and Registered 2011

This fairly screams I am not a new writer, but someone having a bit of joke, and I just checked, I was right. As do some of the turns of phrases tell me an experienced writer. Some of this is wretched, like the last two lines, but some

For the ashes tell the story/

As time burns around the clock/

quite deceptive and clever, A5

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
I can't........

.....take this......

"Part Of The Princess Katie Collection

Copyright, Trademarked and Registered 2011".......

seriously either, sorry. It set my jaw before I even read your work, not a good sign.

Tess

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