by annaswirls
these two poems a number of times and I think they are my favorites of all of your poems Anna. I'm not maternal really but I think I understand what you are saying -- which is really beside the point because there is an existential beauty thing here that absolutely captivates me and sweeps me up into a moment -- private - intense and enveloping and that is totally maternal - I hope you happen to go back and read comments on old poems because I am just blown away by these two poems -- thanks
we need more poems involving the flapping of arms and the shouting of non-words.
Fantastic poems that
compliment each other
perfectly. Beautiful
imagery and very intense.
Loved them both.
Thank you.
~ J
~and I say to your smiling face,
Baby, sometimes Mommy has this dream...~
God the shiver that went through me..
That is intense and the two poems together are wonderful, full, and infinitely melancholy.
Some of the best stuff I've read in a long time.
Thank you
I have to agree with twelveoone. The two poems compliment eachother and one gets more out of the two together than each individually. Hmm something going on here to think about.
I like both poems and love them together.
b'brig
Both should be read together, before commenting. I am surprised how well the complete each other.
I like this line:
Rock and water speak your language.