All Comments on 'The Email Exchange'

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice theme

well done but lacks resolution or pleasing conclusion. nice if they met, or if poem had a twist (the e-mail lover turns out to be a religious priest, a politician, a woman etc), that the relationship continues on and on is not satisfying. nonetheless well done and thanks for the recording! (just kidding). also the poem lost its rhymes rather quickly with out explanation, if this had happen as the result of a meeting or ending it would have marked progression....always look forward to your work

el_ronel_ronalmost 7 years ago

Always loved this one, read it a long time ago but stil remember it

Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

An enticing seduction...fulfilling wanton desires and lusty perversions....

....and it is just the beginning!

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