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by Koba

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread. Thanks for sharing your poem. It's very good!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 16 years ago
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One to read over and over I particularly liked 'To hopscotch through the minefields'.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 16 years ago
very good

I enjoyed this poem, but IMO I think you should have ended with...

'but, the end was bitter'...

just my opinion

ozymandiaskozymandiaskabout 16 years ago
!!!

Previous comment was me!

dominateme1dominateme1about 16 years ago
Sad

I enjoyed the poem but it was so sad. Who doesn't remember a love that's gone? It evokes sad memories, which was the purpose so . . .well done!

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I live in Alaska. I am a Dominant. I enjoy writing erotic stories and poetry. Would love to read any and all feedback from anyone who reads my writings. Feel free to contact me!