All Comments on 'The End of Love'

by UnseenChagrin

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My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Relateable~

Well now heres a poem I can relate to, I believe in the yin and the yang and this poem has a way of showing how love goes thru that cycle. You said what my heart feels...excellent poetry.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Nicely written

The meter pulls me in at the beginning-Great work! But then you lose it in places. Still, I really like this one. Keep writing!

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