All Comments on 'The Feast at the End of the World'

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cavu182cavu18212 months ago

ah yes, the AI DJ/Mixologist: the perfect mix track and drink -- I think I prefer those with a slight edge (like a Navajo blanket with one tiny error somewhere), not quite perfect -- once perfection is achieved why continue?

Satyr61Satyr618 months ago

WOW!! This vision is EXTRAORDINARY. I LOVE THIS!!

mseg14mseg148 months agoAuthor

Thank you! I regard this poem as mostly a little exercise in rhetoric.

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