All Comments on 'The Flow'

Why can't the pearl be fully developed rather than just in the making? Kind of sad for me? Did you deliberately break cannot about three quarters through? I have never seen it written as can not before, that's pretty interesting!

a bond forged in the fires of will

an excellent play with words that

trailed along in a spectacular vision

that sparked hope in the end, love the

beach comparison and descriptions

awesome, witty and down right great poetry