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by sir lancelot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
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some nice images and sentiments here, but in my opinion, this needs to be trimmed way down, and look out for the overused sexy romantic language, use more allusion... sometimes what is not seen is what drives the ladies (and men) wild. That imagination.

and your meteor shower exploding scared me.

:)

but a very lucky lady has your affection

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