All Comments on 'The Forgotten Day'

is the last. I enjoyed.

You have some really nice images here, especially the way you play the stark contrast between the narrator's perceptions and the conventional understanding of things.

My one complaint is that it was a bit to much straight bleakness for me. That's just a matter of taste though, and I still voted the 5.

Poisson - Thank you for the line from the lovely "Paint it Black" by the Rolling Stones. It's an old favorite <3

Gloomy days are my sunshine and those days are few and far between here in the desert :/

I fully appreciate your time taken to comment!

was good