All Comments on 'The Great Down Under--A Fantasy'

perhaps a bit of Poe and bit of Victorian in style. Based on a relationship many years ago with a slightly older foreign woman in Italy, accurately described, who did disappear after a three month relationship never to be heard from again. At the time she left without warning, for foreign shores, she had not had her period and thought she was pregnant. I've added an element of fantasy to the encounter that still remains a mystery to me.

Poem had its moments

from time to time a good question to ask is

"what am i doing here"

in general, but more specifically as a writer and a reader

i.e. read this as if someone else had wrote it, then ask yourself why do i like it

I read it, i hear "Land Down Under" and Inverted Syntax

no

not the band

didn't vote