by sack
Neo got it...A pyramid "Christmas Tree" to reflect the season. Happy Holidays!
Wow you obviously took a lot of effort in this, Sack. This is sweet and seasonal. Happy Holidays to you! :)
tree you got there. I'm new so it didn't bother me that my name wasn't there:) Maybe you wouldn't want it now anyway, LOL!
I just thought you could have added some words- emotions, feelings about these authors. So, I'll give you 100% on that beautiful tree. I'm sorry, but the names didn't do anything for me. No offense to anyone. I just needed more.
I can't come up with anything to add to the comments you have already received so I will just say
"Merry Christmas, Sack"
not poetry, but it is word art. how about that? word art? yes? anyway, do a santa and his reindeer next. ;)
To Crapola: If you read my public comments, you'll find they aren't all positive. I'm sure I've stepped on a few toes in my day, but at least I've tried to be honest. I don't feel any need to kiss up to people, it's just fun to read stories and I enjoy commenting on them.
To Daisy Mae: I have another new poem The Literotica Alphabet, which has the short descriptions you are after. These names DO mean something to many people, but I understand that as a newcomer you would not respond to a laundry list.
Best, Sack
Should always get a 5-and did!
Happy Holidays Sack and to All :)
... that my name is added to such company in anyone's mind, thank you Sack.
The "100" (an aspect of these comments I rather dislike actually) goes as much to the influence on Sack by others as it does to Sack for acknowledging them.
You put Rhys, Slickman, and yours truly underneath Evil Alpaca? What'd we ever do to you?
This proves you've got an imaginative, twisted mind. I knew there was something likable about you. Good work.
Thanks for acknowledging us! I'm sure that I speak for everyone included that we appreciate your attention!
Merry Christmas!
Velvet :-)
to be included with such great authors. Thanks Sack!
Lauren Hynde on one side and Brightlyiburn on the other!
Gotta say, though, I'm still trying to understand poetry...
Bats and Glamour, Steve W, DWSimon, but a good start anyway.
Very Clever and I'm glad I picked an "A" name to go by on Lit! I'm like the twisted little angel on top of the tree!
Sack, you crazy f***er! :p
Great work and I really do feel very privileged to be on your tree. I see Abs is the fairy... Sore bum, love? ;)
Lou
xxx
What an inventive mind you have!
Keep it up, you are fast becoming one of my favorite authors here on lit.USA
That's so cool! I made it into another work. Now when someone says, "You're a real piece of work!", they might not be insulting me!
:D
"Obviously, there is only space for a limited number of writers, I could have created 10 more pyramids like this."
but why would you want to? to kiss more ass? this looks like something a sophmore girl would write on the side of her algebra notebook
how is this a poem
I should one bomb this. *joking* Gee! and I thought I might at least make the 'promising newcomers' list. Aw...well. I'd rather be square anyway!