All Comments on 'The Great Pyramid of Literotica'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Visual you

Sack, your poem looks like a Christmas tree to me ;)

sacksackover 19 years agoAuthor
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Neo got it...A pyramid "Christmas Tree" to reflect the season. Happy Holidays!

moonblademmoonblademover 19 years ago
;)

Wow you obviously took a lot of effort in this, Sack. This is sweet and seasonal. Happy Holidays to you! :)

Daisy MayDaisy Mayover 19 years ago
Nice

tree you got there. I'm new so it didn't bother me that my name wasn't there:) Maybe you wouldn't want it now anyway, LOL!

I just thought you could have added some words- emotions, feelings about these authors. So, I'll give you 100% on that beautiful tree. I'm sorry, but the names didn't do anything for me. No offense to anyone. I just needed more.

StringarStringarover 19 years ago
Great Tree

I can't come up with anything to add to the comments you have already received so I will just say

"Merry Christmas, Sack"

CrapolaCrapolaover 19 years ago
Fuck up!

I mean, SUCK UP! (S'ok, though. I kinda like it.)

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
hmmm

not poetry, but it is word art. how about that? word art? yes? anyway, do a santa and his reindeer next. ;)

sacksackover 19 years agoAuthor
The author responds......

To Crapola: If you read my public comments, you'll find they aren't all positive. I'm sure I've stepped on a few toes in my day, but at least I've tried to be honest. I don't feel any need to kiss up to people, it's just fun to read stories and I enjoy commenting on them.

To Daisy Mae: I have another new poem The Literotica Alphabet, which has the short descriptions you are after. These names DO mean something to many people, but I understand that as a newcomer you would not respond to a laundry list.

Best, Sack

bearleebearleeover 19 years ago
Well, anything with my name in it

Should always get a 5-and did!

Happy Holidays Sack and to All :)

HomerPindarHomerPindarover 19 years ago
I'm flattered

... that my name is added to such company in anyone's mind, thank you Sack.

The "100" (an aspect of these comments I rather dislike actually) goes as much to the influence on Sack by others as it does to Sack for acknowledging them.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 19 years ago
Say What?

You put Rhys, Slickman, and yours truly underneath Evil Alpaca? What'd we ever do to you?

This proves you've got an imaginative, twisted mind. I knew there was something likable about you. Good work.

velvetpievelvetpieover 19 years ago
Sweet, Sack!

Thanks for acknowledging us! I'm sure that I speak for everyone included that we appreciate your attention!

Merry Christmas!

Velvet :-)

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
More than flattered...

to be included with such great authors. Thanks Sack!

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Word Art!

Thanks for the mention, sack. I'm flattered. ~Imp

Alex De KokAlex De Kokover 19 years ago
I'm in good company

Lauren Hynde on one side and Brightlyiburn on the other!

Gotta say, though, I'm still trying to understand poetry...

widespreadinterestswidespreadinterestsover 19 years ago
you missed my personal favorites

Bats and Glamour, Steve W, DWSimon, but a good start anyway.

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
LOL....

Very Clever and I'm glad I picked an "A" name to go by on Lit! I'm like the twisted little angel on top of the tree!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Whatever next!?

Sack, you crazy f***er! :p

Great work and I really do feel very privileged to be on your tree. I see Abs is the fairy... Sore bum, love? ;)

Lou

xxx

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
:)

Funny and inventive...good work sack!

zaxxonzaxxonover 19 years ago
Thanks

Thanks, I'm honored

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Kewly dooley

Now that would have taken some effort!!

w2gooo!!! ;-)

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanover 19 years ago
*Slips sack a $20*

Thanks dude ;-)

SN

Bandit1Bandit1over 19 years ago
Great Job Sack!

What an inventive mind you have!

Keep it up, you are fast becoming one of my favorite authors here on lit.USA

Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaover 19 years ago
Grin

That's so cool! I made it into another work. Now when someone says, "You're a real piece of work!", they might not be insulting me!

:D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
?

"Obviously, there is only space for a limited number of writers, I could have created 10 more pyramids like this."

but why would you want to? to kiss more ass? this looks like something a sophmore girl would write on the side of her algebra notebook

how is this a poem

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Boo Hoo...

I should one bomb this. *joking* Gee! and I thought I might at least make the 'promising newcomers' list. Aw...well. I'd rather be square anyway!

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