All Comments on 'The Hook of your Splendor'

by stevessv

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Rw43Rw43almost 6 years ago
It is beautiful

It is beautiful until the very last line. Sorry, i have a sweet/strong wife who inspires me to greater strength. I could never imagine telling her to "take me."

Your poem, your line. I won't be stealing it.

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Im interested in writing about and exploring D/ stories mostly where a woman dominants a man and often by cuckolding him.