All Comments on 'The Hunt'

by Lillygirlx0x0

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
lovely

very nice.i could feel the heat and need.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
again

nice choice of words.this piece is darker,adult.i liked the picture,your words,painted in my mind.more?

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 14 years ago
Dark and erotic.

Very powerful

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I love to write, poems and short pieces. Reading erotica turns me on, so I thought I would take a stab. My first pieces on this site are a bit embarrassing, the grammar is lacking. But enjoy, hope you finish feeling steamy and hot. : )