All Comments on 'The IceBreaker's Symphony'

I read this as if it were broken up, like Ice breakers <grin...nice write.

Well done with words and phrases

Broken up and apart

Giving the feel of the breaker

Making its way through the field.

I read this poem yesterday, and I'm just now coming back to it. This line "Icebreaker runs to the sun as she falls

Before him" is one that really has an affect on me. Very good poem.